ext_198799 ([identity profile] relic-yuy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] loras_renly 2012-04-17 10:11 pm (UTC)

Loved the scene. Absolutely loved the kissing, Renly was perfect, Finn was gorgeous but...

To stir the pot, I do have to say that I wasn't very pleased with the writing of this scene. Loras was such a girl. He was completely into it until Renly found his bruise then he was all jealous and upset and cockblocky. That's something a woman would do, let his emotions overrule his desire. Men dont change their mind about sex that easy. It just seemed to me that they wrote the scene from a straight perspective borrowing from experiences from a straight relationship and handed it over to 2 guys to pull off as best as they could. And don't get me wrong, Gethin and Finn did fantastically with what they were given. It just felt like a discrepancy to me.

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